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首页>我的晋江> 《好山好水好花儿（完）》第51章

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人啊，活着真是很累，可又舍不得离开这个世界。

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对于人物设置的多少以及主线怎么发展，一定是人见人智。总之，取决权在于作者，而读者往往只需享受即ke.Till this stage, of course most of the threads have been arranged around Huar, and most of other characters are mainly secondary. However, even without much depiction, almost all the characters in this writing look interesting and convincing. If Ane suddenly decides to develop more threads and evenly spread the space on describing other people's (sub)consciousness, it might destroy the momentum/pace of the story, which has been nicely built-up. To me, one attraction of this story is that it looks like a drama, with limited people moving around, but with lots of twists that finally lead to a climax.
Sorry I have problem writing in Chinese again and apologize should my thoughts offend anybody.

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鲜花

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‘有些事情，未必需要在会上争个你短我长。及至真正操作时候，主事人员只要稍微在误差范围内调整一个角度，神不知鬼不觉，便可想怎么来就怎么来。县官不如现管。’
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看ANE大的文得益良多！大束鲜花~~

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好文

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精彩!!

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哈哈，最好朱行长与刘某人合伙贪污去香港投资，然后被金融风暴所累血本无归，然后恶有恶报被拉去抢毙，花儿和水儿不用自己动手就除了心头大患．（事实上他们自己也没那本事）．快哉．不过看来刘某和朱某都急于和荷沅拉关系呢，不然现代通迅设备这么发达，两个人想要通气，发个传真，ＥＭＡＩＬ什么的不就得了，哪还用特意找个信差，这么古老的方式．还是两人又在搞什么阴谋？

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补分

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加分

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盼望更新中

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