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网友:luo 打分:2 [2009-08-10 11:20:28]
I like your story, it sometimes seems funy.however, the english makes me..you know, not comfortable.John's parents are so cute, I wish them can alive in the end, the same as others.
[1楼] 网友:钟响 [2009-08-10 15:50:50]
..........全英........
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[2楼] 网友:kire [2009-08-10 17:57:56]
牛人!!!
[3楼] 网友:annalucia [2009-08-18 13:32:13]
I wish them can alive in the end,这是病句!要么用宾语从句,要么用状语补语。。这是什么个结构???还有funny这个词你打错了。。。
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[4楼] 网友:曜希 [2019-07-05 23:44:28]
9年前。。。2019打卡
[5楼] 网友:宁卷毛 [2024-03-24 21:32:51] 来自四川
哇! 我第一次见黑名单用户
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网友:luo 打分:2 [2009-08-10 11:20:28]
I like your story, it sometimes seems funy.
however, the english makes me..you know, not comfortable.
John's parents are so cute, I wish them can alive in the end, the same as others.
[1楼] 网友:钟响 [2009-08-10 15:50:50]
..........全英........
[投诉]
[2楼] 网友:kire [2009-08-10 17:57:56]
牛人!!!
[投诉]
[3楼] 网友:annalucia [2009-08-18 13:32:13]
I wish them can alive in the end,这是病句!
要么用宾语从句,要么用状语补语。。这是什么个结构???
还有funny这个词你打错了。。。
3 [投诉]
[4楼] 网友:曜希 [2019-07-05 23:44:28]
9年前。。。2019打卡
[投诉]
[5楼] 网友:宁卷毛 [2024-03-24 21:32:51] 来自四川
哇! 我第一次见黑名单用户
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