网友：luo 打分：2 [2009-08-10 11:20:28]

I like your story, it sometimes seems funy.
however, the english makes me..you know, not comfortable.
John's parents are so cute, I wish them can alive in the end, the same as others.

   

[1楼] 网友：钟响 [2009-08-10 15:50:50]

..........全英........

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[2楼] 网友：kire [2009-08-10 17:57:56]

牛人！！！

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[3楼] 网友：annalucia [2009-08-18 13:32:13]

I wish them can alive in the end,这是病句！
要么用宾语从句，要么用状语补语。。这是什么个结构？？？
还有funny这个词你打错了。。。

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[4楼] 网友：曜希 [2019-07-05 23:44:28]

9年前。。。2019打卡

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[5楼] 网友：宁卷毛 [2024-03-24 21:32:51] 来自四川

哇! 我第一次见黑名单用户

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