1) her language style: fluent, beautiful, humorous, inspirational;
2) her skill of narrating: by setting the female protagnist as the narrator, the author cleverly conceals some interesting experiences of the male protagnist, so that his personality remains as a mystery until the latter part of the story.
3) her concerns for real life: surely it’s a fictional story but the feelings are convincing. it is based on real life that the author represents the protagnists’ attitude towards love and life. i believe everyone living an urban life will identify some elements in the story.
4) her employment of details: by doing so, the author makes the story more lifelike, such as songs, supermarket, incidents in 2003,ect. of course, the most vital role is played by coffee, that i believe can be regarded no longer as a property, but "the third protagnist".
i strongly suggest the author adding one more chapter, a monologue of the male protaginst, so that the novel will be complete and the readers will have another good time.
网友：qingshi 打分：2 [2003-12-26 14:25:36]
the author shows her talent in various ways:
1) her language style: fluent, beautiful, humorous, inspirational;
2) her skill of narrating: by setting the female protagnist as the narrator, the author cleverly conceals some interesting experiences of the male protagnist, so that his personality remains as a mystery until the latter part of the story.
3) her concerns for real life: surely it’s a fictional story but the feelings are convincing. it is based on real life that the author represents the protagnists’ attitude towards love and life. i believe everyone living an urban life will identify some elements in the story.
4) her employment of details: by doing so, the author makes the story more lifelike, such as songs, supermarket, incidents in 2003,ect. of course, the most vital role is played by coffee, that i believe can be regarded no longer as a property, but "the third protagnist".
i strongly suggest the author adding one more chapter, a monologue of the male protaginst, so that the novel will be complete and the readers will have another good time.
[1楼] 网友：vodka [2011-06-24 20:49:07]
想问谁能翻译啊……
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