网友：huer 打分：2 [2005-02-16 01:30:35]

reread the whole thing again and find some inconsistency about 庄朴园, here, in this chapter, his mother died giving his birth but in previous chapters, his wife was introduced to him by his mother and some other details about his mother i couldn’t quite remember exactly what 大人 may need to go back and take a look
anyway this is just a reminder on the whole it is still a very good work.

   

 
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