结尾不够真实,有为了悲剧而悲剧之嫌。
如果遭受最重视的爱人、亲友的背叛而自杀是完全可能的。此处并无太大出入。关键在于易的表现。(it’s too difficult for me to put Chinese into this computer, so i often use english. sorry.)
if there are something more important than love, for example enterprise, money, and so on, I can naturally understand why Yi discards and entraps Shengyin, but i don’t find anything in this article. maybe you tell me it’s hatred. however, i doubt it. when you love one person, you will find hatred is really dispendable, so Romeo and Juliet could fall in love dispite the externer pressure.
it seems Yi entraps Shenxia just because he want to demonstrate 天底下没什么事是他办不到的, so the ending seems false. taking an example, could you believe someone cut his hand just to verify his courage? in my point, he is mad.
in a word, 身家利益总要排在前头 is genuine, but not the so-called hatred.
however, it’s a good article. wonderful words and elastic composing.
网友:passby 打分:1 [2004-08-30 23:29:14]
结尾不够真实,有为了悲剧而悲剧之嫌。
如果遭受最重视的爱人、亲友的背叛而自杀是完全可能的。此处并无太大出入。关键在于易的表现。(it’s too difficult for me to put Chinese into this computer, so i often use english. sorry.)
if there are something more important than love, for example enterprise, money, and so on, I can naturally understand why Yi discards and entraps Shengyin, but i don’t find anything in this article. maybe you tell me it’s hatred. however, i doubt it. when you love one person, you will find hatred is really dispendable, so Romeo and Juliet could fall in love dispite the externer pressure.
it seems Yi entraps Shenxia just because he want to demonstrate 天底下没什么事是他办不到的, so the ending seems false. taking an example, could you believe someone cut his hand just to verify his courage? in my point, he is mad.
in a word, 身家利益总要排在前头 is genuine, but not the so-called hatred.
however, it’s a good article. wonderful words and elastic composing.