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　　22．题目： Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents . Others , however , believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion .
　　考官范文：
　　People have differing views with regard to the question of how to make our roads safer . In my view , both punishments and a range of other measures can be used together to promote better driving habits .
　　On the one hand , strict punishments can certainly help to encourage people to drive more safely . Penalties for dangerous drivers can act as a deterrent , meaning that people avoid repeating the same offence . There are various types of driving penalty , such as small fines , licence suspension , driver awareness courses , and even prison sentences . The aim of these punishments is to show dangerous drivers that their actions have negative consequences . As a result , we would hope that drivers become more disciplined and alert , and that they follow the rules more carefully .
　　On the other hand , I believe that safe driving can be promoted in several different ways that do not punish drivers . Firstly , it is vitally important to educate people properly before they start to drive , and this could be done in schools or even as part of an extended or more difficult driving test . Secondly , more attention could be paid to safe road design . For example , signs can be used to warn people , speed bumps and road bends can be added to calm traffic , and speed cameras can help to deter people from driving too quickly . Finally , governments or local councils could reduce road accidents by investing in better public transport , which would mean that fewer people would need to travel by car .
　　In conclusion , while punishments can help to prevent bad driving , I believe that other road safety measures should also be introduced .
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