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63、平等社会和个人成就之间的关系

　　14．题目： In recent years , there has been growing interest in the relationship between equality and personal achievement . Some people believe that individuals can achieve more in egalitarian societies . Others believe that high levels of personal achievement are possible only if individuals are free to succeed or fail according to their individual merits . What is your view of the relationship between equality and personal success ?
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　　In my opinion , an egalitarian society is one in which everyone has the same rights and the same opportunities . I completely agree that people can achieve more in this kind of society .
　　Education is an important factor with regard to personal success in life . I believe that all children should have access to free schooling , and higher education should be either free or affordable for all those who chose to pursue a university degree . In a society without free schooling or affordable higher education , only children and young adults from wealthier families would have access to the best learning opportunities , and they would therefore be better prepared for the job market . This kind of inequality would ensure the success of some but harm the prospects of others .
　　I would argue that equal rights and opportunities are not in conflict with people ' s freedom to succeed or fail . In other words , equality does not mean that people lose their motivation to succeed , or that they are not allowed to fail . On the contrary , I believe that most people would feel more motivated to work hard and reach their potential if they thought that they lived in a fair society . Those who did not make the same effort would know that they had wasted their opportunity . Inequality , on the other hand , would be more likely to demotivate people because they would know that the odds of success were stacked in favour of those from privileged backgrounds .
　　In conclusion , it seems to me that there is a positive relationship between equality and personal success .
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